Thesis: There are some things about myself that I would like to redesign.
1. Something physical (nose, height, etc.)
2. Mental ability (IQ, GPA, etc.)
3. Financial status (job, car, income, etc.)
4. Athletic ability (BB, golf, wresting, etc.)
5. Creative talent (be more musical, artistic, etc.)
6. Change where you live (town, country, state)
7. Change something in your past
8. Change your attitude or outlook
9. Change personality (more assertive, less critical, more outgoing, etc.)
10. Improve relationships
THE NEW ME OR YOUR OWN TITLE
Have you ever looked at yourself in
the mirror and wished that you could change the way you look? Maybe that long nose that you inherited from
great-granddad is not all that flattering.
On the other hand, perhaps you already think you’re the fairest guy or
gal in the land, but do you wish you could be more intelligent, or more
charming, or even more ambitious? There
are three things about myself that I would like to redesign.
The first thing I would change is… (Finish this topic sentence for the
first supporting paragraph.)
The next thing about me that I would
change is… (Finish this topic sentence for the 2nd supporting
paragraph.)
There is one more thing I would
change about myself and that is … (Finish this topic sentence for the 3rd
supporting paragraph.)
Although it would be great to become
this new person, I realize that there are some things I can change and others
that I cannot. I may be able to change (fill
in the blank) but I know that I cannot change (fill in the blank.) I would rather just be myself than to be
someone I am not, anyway. Nevertheless,
it is fun to imagine the possibilities of what it would be like if I could
indeed redesign myself and create a new “me.”
