Monday, September 17, 2012

REVIEW FRAGMENTS & RUN-ONS Medusa Story


7 - REVIEW SENTENCE, FRAGMENTS, RUN-ONS:  MEDUSA STORY

Put the sentences together in paragraph form.  (Do not include numbers.)  Combine or separate sentences so that there are no fragments or run-ons.

  1. Medusa and her two sisters were three horrible monsters who, at one time, had been beautiful women.
  2. Medusa, the most beautiful of the three, was very proud, she boasted that she was even more beautiful than the goddess Athena.
  3. Because of her pride, she and her two sisters were turned into monsters.
  4. Who had hissing serpents for hair.
  5. No one dared look upon Medusa and her sisters.
  6. Because anyone who did turned to stone.
  7. Lying all about them were stones that had once been men.
  8. Medusa and her two sisters menaced the land for years finally they were challenged by Perseus.
  9. A young, handsome warrior.
  10.   Having been given magic weapons by the gods.
  11.   Perseus set out to kill Medusa.
  12.   The only mortal one of the three sisters.
  13.   When he approached the area in which the monsters lived.
  14.   Perseus put on a magic cap which made him invisible he held up a shield that had been given him by Athena.
  15.   Studying the reflection of Medusa and her sisters in his shield.
  16.   Perseus slowly approached the monsters.
  17.   Luckily, they were sleeping.
  18.   Still using the shield as a mirror, he cut off Medusa’s head with a single stroke he put the head into a special pouch.
  19.   Which had also been given to him by Athena.
  20.   The other sisters awoke but could not see him, therefore he escaped with the head of Medusa.